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rielity ([personal profile] rielity) wrote in [community profile] noyabeans2017-07-31 01:29 am

monday | july 31

this should probably count for an update for the post earlier, but since it's long past midnight, might as well. finished the fill at 1773 words, miyamiya - atsumu in the bedroom with a broken mirror. it's rated M and tags are deliberately omitted, so proceed with caution. 

spoilers under the cut. 

I prompted "miya in the bedroom with a mirror" for another miya twins prompt early on in the round, and I was surprised when kii prompted the same, but with a broken mirror. I already had a vague idea of a possible plot that could come with a normal mirror, but a broken mirror... kinda put a spin on things. I started off wanting to write a parallel universe thing, where the twins are actually not twins and only could talk to each other through a mirror. but the mirror is broken, so what could I do with that? make it angsty, of course - why would atsumu smash the mirror? because it reminds him of osamu. why would he smash it? because... Something. because it reminds him of mistakes and every time he looks into the mirror he sees his dead brother's face, and actuslly he's not living in an alternate universe from osamu but he's living in the attempt to delude himself that in an alternate universe, osamu would still be alive and happy, even if they weren't together, even if they weren't brothers.

For this fic I experimented with unreliable narration and shock factor, which I don't usually like to write but was just too irresistible for the nature of the story. I did accidentally (?) write  a little bit of atsufuta and osashira in it lmao it was too convenient, having a Kenji and a Kenjirou to write in as cameos. 

I was wondering how long it would take before I wrote an M-rated fic for hq, and I was genuinely surprised when it turned out it would be a miya twins fic that would be my first. Well~ I did say I'm in a Mood recently :3