friday | march 9

[rielity]

 finished! feels so good to be done with something, though it's by no means my best piece of writing. I'm actually very dissatisfied with the language here, because it's that awkward cross between my formal writing for school and my fic writing style. Consistency? Never heard of her.

I scrapped my original fic plan, because as it turns out, scenes don't necessarily split up across scenes as well as they ideally should. I'm still very concerned about the flow of events and stuff........ So I'm waiting for Saf to give it a look and feedback!